English 113 B
Professor Klepper
23 September, 2013
Music Sampling Rough Draft
Over the years, music artists have taken the work of former artists and used it as
their own. It varies on what usage of the work the new artists took, but if used without
permission it’s considered illegal under the copyright infringement law. The only way to
make this process legal is not only have permission but pay the original artist as well.
Although this sounds like a fair and easy process, only famous artists can realistically
afford to pay for sampling. There should be a new music sampling system where both
famous artists and up-and-coming artists can get sampling because it would make it fair
game for both sides. It would make way for more artists to take older music and evolve it
into their own, and not just let the rich artists get richer.
Walt Disney’s famous short film Steamboat Willie was actually copied from a film
that came out earlier that year called Steamboat Bill, Jr. Disney was allowed to do this
because their was no copyright law back then, but after his work was made, the copyright
law came in effect. In Lawrence Lessigs’ book Free Culture, he states “Early cartoons are
filled with knockoffs—slight variations on winning themes; retellings of ancient
stories. The key to success was the brilliance of the differences.” (Lessig 23) Just like
music artists today, they want to build up upon what former artists created and be noticed
for their input of brilliance and difference. Disney took an old idea and developed his
own, coming out with a much better product than the original. The goal of the new artist
is to come up with something better, but they are stopped by the copyright law, excluding
them from what only famous artists can afford.
I constantly make music, it has been a passion of mine for some time. If I was able
to take sampling from other songs and make it into my own, making music would be
much easier, it would even benefit the former artists as well. In Lessigs’ book Free
Culture, Lessig explains “By limiting the rights musicians have, by partially pirating their
creative work, the record producers, and the public, benefit.”(Lessig 58) Lessig says this
because by making the music free, the music becomes a type of advertisement for people
to come to enjoy. Once the people are hooked by the music, they become fans that want
to purchase merchandise or concert tickets to that artist. It’s the same for sampling as
well. By taking the original and making it your own, the new generation of society will
hear my music, and if I give credit to the original artist the new generation will see this.
Then people would start looking up the original song, making the original artist more
money. Basically what the new artist is doing is not just making money himself, but free
advertising for the former artist as well.
There’s a saying that the poor get poorer and the rich get richer, this statement in
our current sampling program is true. In order to use sampling legally, artists pay large
sums of money so they can use it to evolve the sound. Now if an regular guy off the street
tried sampling without paying, he would be sued large amounts of money he doesn’t
have. So it is basically impossible for normal guy to ever use sampling, for he can’t afford
to use sampling and if he does illegally, he would be sued for millions of dollars. The
famous artists however, can easily pay for the sampling coverage. Then they get their
money back plus lots more of it once their song or album is released. The current system
today is not fair and both groups need a fair hand involved with the sampling mix.
The Hip-Hop Industry is well known for sampling music. Not until the 80’s did
sampling come up in full launch scale. In Tonya M. Evans article, “Sampling,
Looping, and Mashing…. Oh My!: How Hip Hop Music is Scratching More Than the
Surface of Copyright Law” she says, “ … copyright law must be remixed to achieve
optimal balance between a copyright holder’s exclusive rights and the legal space a
second generation innovator needs to build upon existing works in order to create new
ones in cumulative creative genres like music.” She is agreeing with the statement to have
an equal terms between the original artists and the new artists so that the new artists can
create new music with old material. Making a system like this would benefit both
persons for they are both making profit by A: both promoting each other with their styles
of music. B: having people who wouldn’t know about your music become aware of your
sound, and C: once fans hear your music, they will want to see the artists in concert or
buy merchandise off them.
Music industry today is stuck in the Lou. There must be a system where both ends
of the Hip Hop game can have fair chance at sampling, otherwise the poor fall and the
rich keep getting higher to the top. Both artists benefit from the system, lowering the
costs for each of them, and the original artist gets free advertisement from the two artists.
Its is three way win streak, and if it was fair in the past (Walt Disney copying Steamboat
Bill, Jr. for the make of Steamboat Willie) then it should be fair now in the present. Once
the system is created, lots of new music will be developed making a great change in
music. Today’s fix up, can be tomorrow’s new gift of change.
Work Cited
Lessig, Lawrence: Free Culture; The Penguin Press 2004; pg. (23-58)
Tonya M. Evans. “Sampling, Looping, and Mashing…. Oh My!: How Hip Hop Music is Scratching More Than the Surface of Copyright Law” Fordham Intellectual Property, Media & Entertainment Law Journal 21 (2011): 843
1. Your thesis is good, you have stated your position, you want to see a new system, but I suggest you can make it more clearly, I am sure you know how to do it.
ReplyDelete2. the reasons you gave is quite good, and you related to your own experience, that's nice, and you can do more outside sources, make it stronger.
3. I think you can make your counterargument more clearly, so that you can deal with it and then make your suggestion more better.
1) "Although this sounds like a fair and easy process, only famous artists can realistically afford to pay for sampling."
ReplyDelete- The thesis seems more like an opinion and does not include any supportive details. Perhaps being more specific or maybe rewording will improve your thesis. Include your reason why and remember that your thesis explains what the body of the essay will consist of.
2) The supportive details given do not really relate to the thesis; it seems that most of your supports is about what you think instead of strong evidence.
3) Improving the thesis and making it more clear, as well as organizing the body so it has some type of flow; it will strengthened the paper and make your points easier to understand. Use stronger evidence and supportive details; personal opinion is not a good source.
4) There is no counterargument, but the paper does mention how things will change if it occurred.
5) It seems there is no consistent flow in the paper; it all evolves around personal opinion.
6) The transition sentences in between paragraphs are very poor. I suggest creating a sentence that concludes the previous paragraph and at the same time introduce the following one briefly.
Overall:
1) The author is using relevant/professional source but need more instead of using personal opinion as a source.
2) Yes the works cited page is in MLA format.
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Delete"There should be a new music sampling system where both famous artists and up-and-coming artists can get sampling because it would make it fair game for both sides."--- this statement seems to be your thesis. But I feel like your thesis is pretty disconnected from your each paragraph except for last paragraph. And I think your justification of the thesis is not clear: how the richer get richer how the poor becomes more poor? I think if you would put the information about that process specifically, then your thesis would be much stronger.
ReplyDelete"Both artists benefit from the system, lowering the costs for each of them, and the original artist gets free advertisement from the two artists." how the system works? I think you can put more information about that.
Also, it would be better to put some counter arguments from reliable sources.
Overall
you did correct MLA format.
You have a strong thesis statement, but the Walt Disney’s example in the first paragraph seems not supporting your thesis. I think it would be better if you write your own opinion about Walt Disney used early work. And you may consider use more resources in your essay.
ReplyDeleteThis essay is perfectly met the requirement of MLA format.
"Although this sounds like a fair and easy process, only famous artists can realistically afford to pay for sampling." I like this thesis because you use a personal experience.
ReplyDeleteLike i said is good because you used an experience in the past and that is a great reason and example for your thesis.
I would like to see more improvement on the body paragraphs, theyre strong but just a tiny bit more and youll be just fine.
No I really didn't find a counterargument.
I wasn't confused. I was following the essay just fine and never got lost.
Yes the transitions between paragraph to new paragraph are really good.
Yes the writer is using relevant sources and many of them to come in the full essay.
Yes the essay and work cited is in MLA format